Montrez vos paroles de chansons

Postez ici toutes les lyrics (paroles) que vous avez ecrit


J'en fait en anglais parce que j'aime pas ma voix en francais et j'habite au usa donc je le parle le plus souvent

Bon pour les premieres paroles:

you will be burning by the fire
that expresses my desire
to see the flame burn you down
and that will put you in your burial gown

BURN BURN BURN
now you will never return
your life is done
say your last prayer
because your life is over

Now you are dying
Your burned face disgusts me
But now my hate is set free
I no longer have the suffering
Of seeing you walking
Like nothing is happening

BURN BURN BURN
now you will never return
your life is done
say your last prayer
because your life is over


Now you are burning in hell
And that will your one and only cell
For the infinite lasting of time
Now you can pay for your war crime

BURN BURN BURN
now I don’t have to see your face anymore
and the only thing I see of you is your dead corpse
That’s what we all stand for
We all implored for you to stop
All because you wanted to be on top


La fin est nulle je le sais , le burn burn burn pourrait etre changer aussi lol

You were just walking around
You thought your destiny had already set bound
Before you heard gunshot’s sound
And now you are laying on the ground

You had just made up your mind
On what you wanted to be
But someone just shot you from behind
He wanted to do a killing spree
But you were the victim

NOW YOU ARE SLOWLY DYING
WHAT A FUCKED UP FEELING TO FEEL YOUR END COMING
AS YOU LAY DYING
YOU FEEL THE BLOOD SPREADING
AROUND YOUR CRAWLING BODY

This shit is taking too long
But you already know that you don’t belong
You are thinking about what you did wrong
But you only feel like you shouldn’t have lived at all

NOW YOU ARE SLOWLY DYING
WHAT A FUCKED UP FEELING TO FEEL YOUR END COMING
AS YOU LAY DYING
YOU ARE DROWNING
IN YOUR BLOOD THAT KEEPS ON FLOWING

This is the worst death you could have asked
But now you’re dead
But the pain that you made
Will be staying in your vein
For the rest of your days in hell

Now you wonder why you belong there
Think about all the pain you gave me
Now you are staying on the left side of satan
Trying to crawl away from its grasp

NOW YOU ARE SLOWLY DYING
WHAT A FUCKED UP FEELING TO FEEL YOUR END COMING
AS YOU LAY DYING
AND YOU CAN’T DO ANYTHING
TO STOP YOUR GUILT

Death took you away
Because you got into its way
To bring pain upon this poor and sorry life of mine oh mine oh fuckin mine …. burn in hell

bon celle la je l'ai fait en cours mais je trouve qu'elle est vraiment nulle mais je la poste pour vous demandez ce que je pourrais y changer et comment je pourrez mieux la tournez


Bon a vous de postez vos lyrics (desole je me rappelle jamais du mot en francais)

Woa t'es bourrin toi on dirait.
Lyrics = paroles...

brule en enfer sataaaaaaaan

Si tu vis aux états unis essai de faire un effort pour travailler un peu la qualité de ton anglais parce que la c'est quand même de l'élémentaire a base "burn" "Dye" "Blood" et autres rejouissances du genre, faut pas s'étonner que le métal ait des etiquettes de 15m de large collé au dos si les textes des chansons tournent toujours autour de ca.
Deep Purple a fait BURN, maintenant on a BURN BURN BURN, l'instru c'est la même version en accelleré?
Bon plus serieusement il faut pas checher a faire des rimes a tout prix, bosse la qualité intrinseque tu texte avant d'en faire, après tout certains des meilleurs textes de Dylan ne riment pas du tout

surtout que dans ton cas les rimes sont francisées ...
Attention à la prononciation aussi.

Sinon bis repetita mais cherches quelque chose de plus évolué, ça fait vraiment "fan de Marilyn Manson avec trop peu de vocabulaire"


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